This line made me laugh “A real beggar, mindful of the reputational damage this display of health was doing, fake-hobbled over and pulled on his filthy robe to bring him back down to a level more fitting for a supplicant.” I could really visualize this scene
Brilliant
This was great! I loved the dialogue and pacing. The ending was also superb, I could see the smile fading from his face, haha. Excited to read more!
YES! Keep reading Bradley, there's another twenty-five chapters and only four to go!!!
So far so good, Mark! Onto chapter two!
Thanks Alex, I hope you're enjoying the ride 🤩
Drew me in! Didn’t think I’d keep reading but I did. I liked the moment where the alarm bells immediately stopped once whisky was mentioned.
Thank you Erik. Keep going, things get crazy pretty soon 🤩
I’m loving this story! It reads like a movie 🍿
This line made me laugh “A real beggar, mindful of the reputational damage this display of health was doing, fake-hobbled over and pulled on his filthy robe to bring him back down to a level more fitting for a supplicant.” I could really visualize this scene
Thanks 🤩
Very enjoyable read. ❤️
and that cliffhanger! Nice.